Louis Valore: Music

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i really like this song!! it reminds me of the early beatles.. i always loved the innocence of beatle songs such as.. "all my loving"..
"from me to you" .. "thank you girl".. etc.. to me there's real beauty in so called "simple poetry".
being mentally challenged to begin with, i don't have to worry about writing like i'm a mental giant!! lol!! to me, a great song is a song that you can feel.. and when people want to be loved, the best thing that they can hear is "i love you". anyway..back to the song..
the song has some real nice guitar work floating up and down the scale.
there's a synth. bass in the beginning that's very nice.
the middle part reminds me of early lennon-mccartney as far as the harmony goes. all in all, a very nice, positive vibe to this song!!

i could never sleep until you're back with me..
i will always weep till then
don't you understand that
i am all alone..
a lonely man alone..
how about we try to make it girl..
how about we try to make it girl..
how about we try it one more time..
how about we try to make it girl ??
i will try to put aside my foolish pride..
i will try to put aside..
maybe then you'll whisper
that i'm still the one..
maybe then you'll whisper one..